Villanelle Experiment
Danjaruz Depiction:
Daily Danjaruz Deliberation:
I'm an artist, and I'm sensitive about my shit...
Danjaruz Villanelle:
Ruthless Pride
God save the man who is full of pride
Cold and ruthless, he is the troubled man who
Lives empty days and loves lonely nights
Seeking no comfort in the love in his life
Isolating himself; loneliness is all he can do
God save the man who is full of pride
Struggling against love’s intensity, from which he cannot hide
Known to others only as the intriguing brother who
Lives empty days and loves lonely nights
Consummate loner, path created in strife
Battling demons his entire life, now able to make it through
God save the man who is full of pride
Continues the way he knows and believes is right
One all would love, if only they knew the man who
Lives empty days and loves lonely nights
Wandering this earth, he has created and embraced his plight
Needing no one, no thing. What is a proud man to do?
God save the man who is full of pride
Living empty day and loving lonely nights…
Daily Danjaruz Deliberation:
I'm an artist, and I'm sensitive about my shit...
Danjaruz Villanelle:
Ruthless Pride
God save the man who is full of pride
Cold and ruthless, he is the troubled man who
Lives empty days and loves lonely nights
Seeking no comfort in the love in his life
Isolating himself; loneliness is all he can do
God save the man who is full of pride
Struggling against love’s intensity, from which he cannot hide
Known to others only as the intriguing brother who
Lives empty days and loves lonely nights
Consummate loner, path created in strife
Battling demons his entire life, now able to make it through
God save the man who is full of pride
Continues the way he knows and believes is right
One all would love, if only they knew the man who
Lives empty days and loves lonely nights
Wandering this earth, he has created and embraced his plight
Needing no one, no thing. What is a proud man to do?
God save the man who is full of pride
Living empty day and loving lonely nights…
posted by MBT4679 at 12/03/2004 01:34:00 PM
2 Comments:
This man you speak of , he embraces his imperfections, breathlessly waits for an opportunity to display them to all who are curious. He's an inside out man
and prefers to live between rain drops and broken promises. I know him well.
Loved reading your stuff!!
Mr. looking glass.
Thank you for the comment!!!! I experiment with various forms of poetry because I teach poetry, and I need to make examples for my students. I was inspired by someone I know, someone who, as you say, almost chooses to be the way he is. Or at least he understands and embraces it.
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